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If “Literally” Has Been Hijacked, What’s Correct?

February 4, 2014 by Barbara McNichol Leave a Comment

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A subscriber to my monthly ezine Add Power to Your Pen posed this burning question:

“As a word lover, I continue to enjoy your explanations of mistakes I hear every day, often from people who should know better! Would you please explain to your readers the correct use of the word literally? I keep hearing people say things like, ‘When I got the news, I was literally over the moon.’ Really? I thought only Sir Richard Branson had the money to do that!”

After a bit of research, here’s how I responded:

The expert who writes in “Daily Writing Tips” considers “literally” to be a word with a precise meaning that’s getting hi-jacked. “Literally is one of those words like crazy, awesome, and wicked that are overused in inappropriate contexts by speakers unaccustomed to thinking about the meaning of words. Annoying? Yes. Destroying the language? Probably not.”

This expert has also written: “Correctly, ‘literally’ should be used when a turn of phrase usually employed in a metaphorical sense enjoys a rare moment of non-metaphorical applicability: the phrase becomes true in a literal, words-meaning-exactly-what-they-say sense. Now it’s being substituted for ‘very’—e.g., literally furious, literally champing at the bit, literally scared me half to death.”

Here’s how dictionary.com defines lit•er•al•ly (adverb)

  1. in the literal or strict sense: What does the word mean literally?
  2. in a literal manner; word for word: to translate literally.
  3. actually; without exaggeration or inaccuracy: The city was literally destroyed.
  4. in effect; in substance; very nearly; virtually.

Did you notice how 3 and 4 contradict one another? We haven’t resolved anything!

To summarize, using “literally” as “very” is looked down on by traditionalists. Nevertheless, it shows up in all except the most carefully edited work.

Put me in the camp with the traditionalists who prefer the original “pure” meaning as defined in dictionary.com’s 1, 2, and 3.  If you truly care about precision in your writing, stick with us!

Filed Under: Writing Tips Tagged With: Daily Writing Tips, nonfiction book editing, precision language, professional editing services, Sir Richard Branson, strengthen your writing, traditionalists in writing

How Do You Use “Literally” When You Write?

December 3, 2013 by Barbara McNichol Leave a Comment

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by Barbara McNichol

One of my favorite blogs–Daily Writing Tips–keeps bringing up language issues that hit home for lovers of the English language.

A recent blog post addressed how the meaning of “literally” has seemingly changed (not for the better, in my opinion). It’s controversial and fun to read!

Take in this well-researched rant and weigh in with your opinion.

Which “literally” Do You Mean?

You may have missed all the fuss when the media discovered that the Oxford English Dictionary has added an entry for the figurative use of literally.

Among the wails of outrage and dismay was this from a Reddit user: “We did it guys, we finally killed English.”

Here’s the offending OED entry:

literally: colloq. Used to indicate that some (freq. conventional) metaphorical or hyperbolical expression is to be taken in the strongest admissible sense: ‘virtually, as good as’; (also) ‘completely, utterly, absolutely’.

Anguished cries of indignation are still echoing across the web. Apparently a lot of commenters imagine that adding a word to a dictionary reflects an automatic endorsement.

Dictionaries record words that people say. The entry that raised such a stir in August 2013 was actually added in September 2011. My copy of the Compact Oxford English Dictionary—the one you read with the accompanying rectangular magnifying glass—doesn’t have a separate entry, but it does note this use of literally and gives an example from 1863. The new OED entry includes an example from 1769.

Like it or not, in the 21st century, literally is widely used as a mindless intensifier. Just browse the web:

  • The news literally knocked my socks off!
  • Every time I cleanse, I can literally feel the toxins leaving my body!
  • George Clooney Is The Best Part Of “Gravity” Because He Is Literally Real-Life Buzz Lightyear
  • Kelly Clarkson: “I literally dropped 18 pounds in a month”
  • He’s literally left Ben Haim for dead there.”

Poor old OED. If they label a word “nonstandard, “or “vulgar,” they’re castigated for being prescriptive. If they give space to a new twist on an old word, they’re accused of opening the door to the destruction of the English language.

Just because a word is “in the dictionary” doesn’t compel us to use it in our own writing or speech. The OED has an entry for irregardless, but only the most uninformed English speaker would use the word in a serious context.

The “new” definition of literally doesn’t come without a caveat:

Now one of the most common uses, although often considered irregular in standard English since it reverses the original sense of literally (‘not figuratively or metaphorically’).

Attempting to control the way other people use language is futile. So is getting upset when they don’t use words the way you want them to.

Literally is one of those words like crazy, awesome, and wicked that are overused in inappropriate contexts by speakers unaccustomed to thinking about the meaning of words. Annoying? Yes. Destroying the language? Probably not.

For my part, I intend to continue using the word wicked to mean “evil or morally wrong,” although I won’t have any difficulty understanding a Facebook comment that says, “My mother makes wicked pies.”

As for using literally to intensify a metaphor, I don’t plan to do it myself, but I always enjoy the terrific images some of them conjure up, like this one:

“That’s literally opening a team up and putting them to the sword” – Niall Quinn

– from http://www.dailywritingtips.com

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Ideas for Picking Titles from Daily Writing Tips

December 17, 2011 by Barbara McNichol Leave a Comment

Editor’s note: I hope you enjoy these fun ways of picking titles from Daily Writing Tips–a fabulous resource for writers.

Picking a title can often be the hardest part of a writing project. Sometimes the title just comes to you, but more often than not, you have to put quite a bit of work into finding just the right one. You may even have to sift through several titles before you find one that sits well with you. Here are a few suggestions to try:

1. Mad Libs

Think of a couple adjectives, nouns and verbs that describe your story. Write them all down on a sheet of paper and combine them into different phrases. Sometimes you can pick up on a title that works.

2. Pick a Part

Look for an important turning point in your novel or just focus on the climax. Describe this event on paper. Pick out the words or phrases that stand out to you in your description. Mix and match these words to see what works for you.

3. Live by Example

Pick out novels or short stories that run in the same genre as your project. Study the titles and how they relate to the story as a whole. Then, look at your project as a whole. Think of the theme or overall message of your book. Write down some words that go along with your theme and work them to see if you can find a fitting title.

4. Go for the Obscure

Avoid the obvious “The” titles like “The Pink Slipper” or “The Brown Dog.” Look for slight recurring themes or undercurrents in your novel and try naming your novel after those subtle nuances. JK Rowling, author of the Harry Potter series, is a genius with titles. The titles, especially the Half-Blood Prince, all highlight under-riding themes that later play a large role in the series as a whole.

5. Appeal to the Higher

Poets usually have a way of weaving words in a beautiful tapestry of art that put prose writers to shame. Read some famous poetry and write down words and phrases that stick out to you. Song lyrics often have the same effect. You can find some powerful titles by mixing, matching and combining words from powerful lyrics.

6. A Writer’s Best Friend

Consult your thesaurus and look up synonyms for commonly occurring words in your novel. Write down as many synonyms as you can to try and get a fresh point of view on an event in your novel. Look up these synonyms in the dictionary to get a better understanding of their meaning. Use different words in context to find a combination that you like.

7. Super Easy Way

Type “title generator” into Google and see what pops up. There are several websites that will either have you type in a couple descriptive words and scramble them for you or they’ll just generate some random titles for a variety of genres. Some, like guywiththecoat.com, just generate extremely random and funny titles. Mostly, these titles are just good for a laugh, like “Pants ride the Bus,” but you may actually be able to find something that works with your project.

Reprinted from Daily Writing Tips, Dec. 16, 2011

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