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Take 18 Days to Become a Better Writer

September 24, 2019 by Barbara McNichol Leave a Comment

by Barbara McNichol

Incremental learning makes a difference when you set any goal for yourself, including becoming a better writer.

Why would you desire to have better writing? To get hired or promoted, to attract more clients, to build your reputation and boost your book sales–to name only a few benefits.

Your action item: To reap these benefits, set aside time for 18 days to improve your writing, whether it’s for book chapters, reports, or sensitive emails.

In each of those days, you would study one of these easy, effective tips to hone your writing craft. Using them habitually, you’ll find you get better results and your confidence will grow. Any time you might spend in a writing WordShop (including those I offer) is reinforced by the ideas in this e-guide.

Your assurance: These practical, immediately usable tips have been compiled over years of editing nonfiction books and conducting business writing classes. You can feel assured writers have tested them thoroughly!

Your goal: Make a point of integrating a fresh tip into your writing every day. You’ll see how perfecting the communication loop through improved writing benefits your readers, your coworkers, you clients, and ultimately your career.

Your Key to Better Writing

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This e-guide can be purchased for only $14.95. Click here to order. Use code 18DAYS to receive a $4.95 discount! Any questions? Contact me at editor@barbaramcnichol.com

Have you already worked with this e-guide? If so, please leave your comments here. How did it help you? Inquiring minds want to know!

Filed Under: Business Writing, Compelling Special Tagged With: better writer, book writing tips, business writing tips, editing for nonficiton authors, how to improve writing, incremental learning, nonfiction book editing, professional book editing, tips for writing, write better, writing techniques, Writing Tips

Don’t Leave Your Readers Guessing

September 14, 2018 by Barbara McNichol Leave a Comment

by Barbara McNichol

readers, write for readersWhether you’re writing an email, an article, a report, or a proposal, never leave your readers guessing what you really want.

Specifically, they shouldn’t have to wonder about these two critical components of communicating:

  • Why have you told them this information?
  • What are they are supposed to do with it?

It’s easy (and lazy) to say, “Give clear instructions and point readers to their next action.” But here’s a more concrete method.

Use a planning tool called Setting Your Objectives that echoes the traditional journalism basics: Who, What, Why, Where, When, and How.

Before you write the first sentence, answer each of these questions on paper as they apply to the written piece you’re crafting. The more detail the better . . .

WHO: Target Audience—Who will read this? What do you know about them already? Who will be affected by what your message says?

WHAT: Message or takeaway, including call to action—What do you want the reader to do, think, believe, or remember as a result of reading your piece? E.g., Attend this important meeting. Consider this point of view. Review this proposal. Refund my money.

WHY: Purpose and benefits—Why do the readers need this information? What’s in it for them? Why should they care?

WHEN & WHERE: Logistics—What details need to be spelled out? If it’s an event or meeting, specify the time, location and other essential facts.

HOW: Style and tone—How do you want your reader to “hear” you? E.g., polite, apologetic, excited, firm, demanding, laid back, urgent, or something else?

Once you’ve thought through all of these, it’s smooth sailing. Why? Because your brain has already included the critical points and especially the two we started with:

  • WHY you have told them the information
  • WHAT they’re supposed to do with it.

By consistently using the planning tool Setting Your Objectives, you’ll find you can craft your pieces more quickly and more completely every time.

How do you ensure your writing is communicating with your readers? Learn more at www.WordTrippers.com

 

Filed Under: Article Writing, Business Writing Tagged With: admin professionals, article writer, book writer, business writer, editing for nonfiction authors, five w's, good writing techniques, How to become a better writer, How to write an article, nonfiction editor, professional book editor, readers, why guess, writers and readers, writing techniques, Writing Tips, writing tools

Use Hidden Headings to Keep Your Message on Track

March 28, 2016 by Barbara McNichol Leave a Comment

by John Hunter, guest blogger

Let me share a technique for initially drafting paragraphs within documents or chapters so the message stays on track. It’s called hidden headers.

During the initial stages of the creative process, make a list of concise headers corresponding to the content and purpose of each paragraph. Shuffle the list until you create a logical connection and progression from one to the next. From here, expand each header into a complete paragraph that fleshes out the point. But the trick is not to delete these headers; rather, hide them when they’re not required.

Apply “Hidden” Style to Create Hidden Headings

How do you do that? Most word processing programs allow you to assign various styles of the components within a document. By simply assigning the “hidden” style, you can  make these headers invisible.

Although these hidden headings are useful when a document is initially drafted, there are benefits in maintaining them throughout the editing cycle. Editors sometimes struggle with the logic flow of large documents. If the headers can be viewed on their own, it helps them analyze the author’s intended flow. Then it becomes a matter of verifying that the headers accurately represent the content of the corresponding paragraphs.

Write a Précis of Key Content in Hidden Headings

This piecemeal approach helps the focus of the piece because each paragraph can be written in relative isolation with guidance from the header. In this context, the hidden heading is a précis of the paragraph’s intended point. Because the header summarizes the message, it’s easier for the editor to sharpen the content to that key message.

You can use this technique for individual or shared documents and extend it to an online implementation for a broader audience. The online version clones any document containing the optional headers, which can be switched on or off as required.

To see an example of this in action, go to http://rulesforeternity.com/chapter1.php Be sure to include the undocumented URL parameter so the hidden paragraph headings are visible. http://rulesforeternity.com/chapter1.php?para=show

You’ll find this hidden headings technique helps enormously with flow while keeping the message aligned with your original intent.

John Hunter was raised in Australia where an uncluttered lifestyle provided hands-on exposure to the wonders of nature.  At the University of Melbourne, he earned an honors degree in science, qualifying as a particle physicist. But it soon became apparent that nuclear-phobic Australia offered limited career prospects so he completed a second degree in electrical engineering. John worked with Schlumberger as an oil engineer before retiring to Queensland where he established a small electronics business—purely a front to facilitate his desire to invent things.  His proudest achievement was inventing the Computaphon, the world´s first electronic phone. He has since gravitated to software development and cosmology, interests that continue to this day. 

What techniques help you in the writing process? Share them here.

Filed Under: Book Writing Tagged With: apply hidden style, apply styles, hidden headings, John Hunter, nonfiction book editing, writing techniques

Authors and Editors: Save Time and Money with These Writing Techniques

December 13, 2014 by Barbara McNichol Leave a Comment

by Barbara McNichol

Authors and editors, how  can you employ critical techniques that copyeditors use in your own work?

Recently, I did a teleclass with slides to follow. It was hosted by Janice Campbell for members of NAIWE*.

In this teleclass, I shared tricks of my trade that can save writers time and money in the editing process.  As a way to sharpen their skills, editors will benefit from listening to the class and viewing the instructional slides, too!

Download the slides here: http://tinyurl.com/kpt7coh

Note: If you have problems, email me to request the slides

Listen to the teleclass: http://tinyurl.com/o3wo8fs

* What is NAIWE?NAIWE logo

The National Association of Independent Writers and editors is a professional association for writers, editors, and anyone who works with words.

Open to writers/editors in any country, NAIWE helps its members create multiple streams of writing income.

I am a charter member of this organization. Check out my page at http://barbaramcnichol.naiwe.com/

Authors and Editors: Consider joining yourself. Details at this link:

Would you like to build your writing or editing career? Join the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors for success and support!

Filed Under: Editors and Authors Tagged With: #business book editing, authors and editors, Barbara McNichol, editing techniques, Janice Campbell, NAIWE, professional book editing services, writers and editors, writing techniques

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